I'm not sure if I did this right, but at least I tried. This is my poem for Read Write Poem's weekly writing prompt. Happy Thursday!
You want me to drape myself
in your absence.
Discuss politics and make you
lasagna for breakfast
You want me to allow myself
to enter into an abscess
of the air you breathe
You want to become an
extension of me
You want apostrophes
And angels and apologies
You want arsenal to launch
You want too much
You want to get off at Addison,
Armitage or Belmont
I want to keep going
See the anatomy of an
aerial view
Thursday, August 13, 2009
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Wonderful alliteration. It worked for me.
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Anyone who eats lasagne for breakfast is suspect.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of sound here and the ending is fantastic.
ReplyDeletebeen too long since i visited your tasty blog. everytime I read your poems. i get misty eyed and miss writing so much! you've inspired me to pick up the pen again! let's see what I can come up with.
ReplyDeleteAntonio, I hope you'll publish some writing on your blog! I'm looking forward to reading what comes out of that talented mind of yours :)
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