Friday, September 4, 2009

My 100th post and listen closely...

This is my 100th posting on my blog! Oh I am so excited!

This is also my fourth poem for the Read Write Poem Poetry Mini-Challenge.

Drip
Drip
Drip

The coffee make
The leaky ceiling
The tears falling from this face
Onto college-ruled paper

Drip
Drip
Drip

And disappearing into nothingness
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2009 at 4:12 AM

    I like the idea. You might experiment with sounds in the central portion, maybe making the meter echo the drip, drip

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  2. Anya PadyamSeptember 6, 2009 at 10:39 PM

    Like the sound, the drips are cool!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2009 at 7:32 AM

    the detail of the college-ruled paper really gives this personality. you've done so well with this challenge!

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  4. Radio NowhereSeptember 11, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    What everyone else said. And then some.

    Mark
    http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/

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