Mythological
I took the brunt of the weight
Shouldered the burden
Throwing stones at the elite
Watching them shatter like promises
Drawing back simple
No question for authority
Hercules couldn’t have made
A better attempt
I, always the enthusiast
Treaded water and froth thigh-high
With a fertile mind
And half-expected you to notice
Sundered by tragedy
On a quest for the unknown

nicely done...thanks for sharing
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ReplyDeleteNice use of the words. I really like how the title ties in to the poem, in terms of the narrator's (dashed) expectations.
Nice use of the words - I especially like:
ReplyDelete"Watching them shatter like promises" and "And half expected you to notice".
Nice work! Thanks for posting!
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