An image prompt this week for Read Write Poem.
I bow down
Kneel before this hazard
Ahead of me
Standing tall isn’t an option
I’ve created this monster
An anomaly
Not beyond repair
Just slightly out of reach
I bow down
Kneel before this hazard
Ahead of me
Standing tall isn’t an option
I’ve created this monster
An anomaly
Not beyond repair
Just slightly out of reach
Image by Sepulture (mood disorder)
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I like this image, and how you posted the photo after wards, because you could see the picture before it really appears...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, succinct capture - almost like the words are a photo, too!
ReplyDeleteThe words sing to you!
ReplyDeleteNice!
Pamela
I like the rhyme at the third and sixth lines and the dark tone is well constructed.
ReplyDelete"out of reach" is a wonderful ending to this poem....lovely and thanks for sharing this
ReplyDeleteJust slightly out of reach - an excellent line which probably slightly fits almost everything! I love it.
ReplyDeletesimple works well for this. I especially like the ending (is Knell what you wanted or a typpo?)
ReplyDeleteHa ha! Nice catch; that was a typo.
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