Saturday, April 24, 2010

Day 24: Love is Blind

My poem for the day 24 Read Write Poem prompt. This one took a couple tries.

The window is open
The breeze hits me hard
And like a new beginning
It sweeps through the house
Blowing past our memories
Tempting them to fall off the walls
Whispering love is blind
Our footsteps tell a different story

5 comments:

  1. yes yes yes and YES for a wonderful little poem Jessica (such a great name),,,my oldest daughter is Jessica also

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  2. oh that flows and travels as light.....though i do not think this reflects the contents... humble pie

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  3. Beautifully written and expressed!!

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  4. love the line tempting memories to fall off the walls, isn't this where so many of them live? Nice poem.

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  5. I like ambiguity of whether breeze or footsteps are whispering love is blind

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