Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Day 27: The end is near. I still adore you.

I wrote two poems using the same word. Is that weird?

You can find the prompt details here and other things to keep you busy at Read Write Poem.

Poem One:

A dream of you
Dancing into my world
On your white horse
Riding in like a knight
Except without the armor

Poem Two:

All this time
Deer in the headlights looks
Only helped to focus on
Revolving door secrets
Everything changes and you’re gone

4 comments:

  1. First poem: couldn't at least his clothes be shiny? Even without the armor? Second poem: look ahead to the future. You deserve better!

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  2. knights on horses scare me... they eventually fall... deer in the headlights... absolutely!!! release engage

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  3. Definitely sad, but very nicely done!

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