*Garbage* Texture by pareeerica
Empty Spaces
The empty space
Seems so promising
But I can only promise
One thing
If you give me
Too many chances
I’ll mess it all up
I’ll take you for granted
I’ll leave you
Seeing red
The empty space
Means one thing
I take
More than I give
I’ve always been
A selfish girl
I have no intention
Of changing
I’m not deserving
Of your love
The empty space
Is a reminder
If we push any harder
The center won’t hold
We’ll both
End up alone
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The Spaces Between
There’s a space
Between the first time
And the last time
We met
I go over the scenes
In my head
Wondering –
What to do
What to say
What to wear
When I know
You’ll catch a glimpse
Of me
There’s a space
Between the moment
I started to fall in love
And you started slipping
Away
I had you so close
Now I only have you in
Dreams
both are great...very strong....also love the red ...i have painting quite similar to this...everyone says there is nothing to it...but they should look.....keep writing...your awsome by keeping up
ReplyDeleteI like how you riff of the image and play with the idea of space here - vacuums to be filled, spaces between things. Very creative.
ReplyDeleteI like the couplet style and the surprises where you chose to break the pattern in the second poem.
ReplyDeletei liked both of these...
ReplyDeletebut i especially liked the first one...
"if we push any harder,
the center won't hold"
love this.