Not my best work, but as good as it's going to get for the day. Two offerings for "Seeing Red," the Read Write Poem prompt.
Nocturnal
I used to dream in red
about changing the world
I thought I was special
Now I dream in black and white
about unrequited love,
only to realize I’m the same
as everyone else
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A Crimson List
I sit down,
make a list of all the things I’ll need
A mixer
for tossing in sins
A notebook
For keeping secrets,
generating scarlet letters,
and confessions
A vacuum
for destroying the remnants
of our failures
Candles
for melting the evidence
The red line train
for escaping
All of the items are red
because red demands attention
Satisfied,
I put the plan into action
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
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Jessica--I really like both of these! Not bad for not your best work!
ReplyDeleteI like the reds you chose. "Now I dream in black and white about unrequited love" really resonated for me too. Nicely put.
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