The Laugh by Pensiero
Day 6, Poem 6.
Inspiration courtesy of Pensiero's The Laugh and readwritepoem.com.
You stand alone
No excess baggage
As passersby
Keep passing by
They pretend
You go unnoticed
Pretend to look
Right through you
No one bothers
To comment
On how thin you look
But they think to themselves
Nothing but bones
You smile,
Then laugh
Because you know
One day they’ll be
Nothing but bones too
At first I thought maybe it was about eating disorders, then the last few lines clued me in. Interesting shot, nice take on it.
ReplyDeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteNice wit you have...
yes, someday we're all just bones...
ReplyDeleteWhen I was scanning the other photos I saw this one and found it interesting but not inspiring. I really like your take and the last lines were great.
ReplyDeleteGreat image, and I like where you take it.
ReplyDeleteSo clever and witty!
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