Monday, April 6, 2009

It's day six and I'm nothing but bones.

The Laugh by Pensiero
Day 6, Poem 6.
Inspiration courtesy of Pensiero's The Laugh and readwritepoem.com.

Nothing but Bones

You stand alone
No excess baggage
As passersby
Keep passing by

They pretend
You go unnoticed
Pretend to look
Right through you

No one bothers
To comment
On how thin you look
But they think to themselves
Nothing but bones

You smile,
Then laugh
Because you know
One day they’ll be
Nothing but bones too

6 comments:

  1. At first I thought maybe it was about eating disorders, then the last few lines clued me in. Interesting shot, nice take on it.

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  2. I love it!
    Nice wit you have...

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  3. yes, someday we're all just bones...

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  4. When I was scanning the other photos I saw this one and found it interesting but not inspiring. I really like your take and the last lines were great.

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  5. Great image, and I like where you take it.

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